I can't believe you spilled over into two comments!! Ahahaha!
I've read this over and over and I still can't stop grinning. I really hoped you would like it but god I never even dreamed of this reaction ♥
I couldn't not write this. The art was just so perfect, and I wanted to know more about these two and see them come together and support each other.
I'm glad you liked the changes in Theo's voice. I wanted to sort of show the flexible way Theo naturally thinks about gender by implying that they sometimes morph between genders slightly without even thinking about it. I also think that it only happens when Theo is relaxed, which shows how comfortable he feels around both Jamie and Emma =)
I'm glad you picked up on the crossdressing not being a kink here. I saw Jamie, at this time, as not being sure of his identity. Since he's realised that side of him, he's only been encouraged to hide it so he hasn't been able to figure it out yet. He knows it involves skirts and dresses, but that's really as far as his understanding goes.
I mainly went with first person to make the pronouns a lot easier to deal with xD But it's good to know it worked for other reasons too.
I don't even know what to say, this comment really is ALL THE INCREDIBLE THINGS but I have work now so I'll take the other sock and cram it in XD! ♥♥
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Date: 2017-01-18 05:43 pm (UTC)I've read this over and over and I still can't stop grinning. I really hoped you would like it but god I never even dreamed of this reaction ♥
I couldn't not write this. The art was just so perfect, and I wanted to know more about these two and see them come together and support each other.
I'm glad you liked the changes in Theo's voice. I wanted to sort of show the flexible way Theo naturally thinks about gender by implying that they sometimes morph between genders slightly without even thinking about it. I also think that it only happens when Theo is relaxed, which shows how comfortable he feels around both Jamie and Emma =)
Oh, there's definitely something blooming there... ;)
I'm glad you picked up on the crossdressing not being a kink here. I saw Jamie, at this time, as not being sure of his identity. Since he's realised that side of him, he's only been encouraged to hide it so he hasn't been able to figure it out yet. He knows it involves skirts and dresses, but that's really as far as his understanding goes.
I mainly went with first person to make the pronouns a lot easier to deal with xD But it's good to know it worked for other reasons too.
I don't even know what to say, this comment really is ALL THE INCREDIBLE THINGS but I have work now so I'll take the other sock and cram it in XD! ♥♥