Well whoops, maybe I do need a second pair of eyes on drabbles :/ Al is hidden, and James realises someone is in his room but doesn't know who, so the someone who knows is actually Al... Do you think it would be clearer if I changed it to 'Someone heard'? x
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Date: 2016-03-30 11:28 am (UTC)