http://myfirstisfourth.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] myfirstisfourth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] llaeyro 2017-01-19 08:38 pm (UTC)

Intriguing

An unusual piece to be sure, but you've written it so beautifully! It wasn't the clothes and such that drew me into the story, however, it was really more about the emotions and reactions. I "felt" James wariness, then his elation, the growing tension between James/Teddy-Emma/Theo. Once more you have pulled me into a story I might otherwise not have generally read and I am not disappointed at all! :)

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