http://shiftylinguini.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shiftylinguini.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] llaeyro 2016-05-05 10:16 am (UTC)

There’s rather an appalling lack of smut here, however, for which I’m blaming Miss shiftylinguini for reminding me of the many impracticalities of sex in water.

OMG sorrrryyyyy hahaha!!! I ruined the fun with my talk of shower cockups, and not sexy ones. Least it wasn't at a beach - then I'd be waxing lyrical about sandy cracks and rashes.

No, but this is seriously lovely, and hot, and I LOVED Harry being like 'dude I was fucking freezing' because things like that rock my world. Realistic sex is my jam, complete with all the bits that don't go to plan and Harry wanting to go along with Ron's fantasy/idea even though it hadn't occurred to him was perfect.

And I'm so impressed you did this in, like, a day!

xx

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