http://shiftylinguini.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shiftylinguini.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] llaeyro 2016-03-08 01:08 am (UTC)

Oh man, this is perfect!!!!!

I love awkward first times, and over-eagerness, and Scorp's internal dialogue is just great. And hot, so hot, unf!

I tried to pick which lines were my favourite, but I think it's actually the entire thing. I loved Scorpius announcing he was bigger than Al and Al being suitably appalled and trying to sulk with half Scorp's hand up his arse (ha!), and the dirty talk is amazing. Scorpius trying to keep it together is just utterly divine, I love that so much. Al is thoroughly lovely here, and I can't decide who is more adorable about the whole thing. Or hotter. It's a tie :D

This whole thing is everything I love about awkward/sweet/slightly disastrous first times.

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