ext_61909 ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_melodic_/) wrote in [personal profile] llaeyro 2016-02-23 07:10 pm (UTC)

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Oh. My. Goodness.

THIS WAS EXCELLENT!

Wow, where to begin? First of all, THANK YOU!!! It was so very sweet of you to think of me and my unclaimed prompt and write this glorious slice of smut! It was so hot, exactly what I had in mind when I wrote the prompt. Sexy, cute, playful, sweet.... check, check, check, check!


“Push out,” Scorpius says between kisses. Al does, but there’s still a hint of pain in the corners of Al’s eyes as Scorpius pushes in. “Alright?”

“Need to trim your nails,” he mumbles.


Haha! I just loved this little interaction. It made me literally chuckle aloud!

“Why?” Al moans impatiently, “If you can take it after two fingers—”

“I’m bigger than you are.”

“Wow, thanks for that. You really know how to keep a guy in the mood.”


OMG! An other lovely gem between these two boys. Just so funny and playful and exactly how you would imagine two somewhat inexperienced school boys having sex XD


The kiss is so hot, Scorpius is squeezing the base of his cock again. Not yet.


GAH!!! This imagery is so freaking hot!!!

Scorpius leans in slowly, his foreskin being pushed back by the tight ring of muscle, revealing the sensitive cockhead. He can feel it. It’s going to be too much.

Oh my... ::fans self:: and this!!! The image of this, Scorpius's thoughts.... lsdkfsdl

He can feel it. It’s going to be too much. Even Hagrid in his underpants won’t be able to stave it off once he pushes all the way inside

HAH! Once again literally laughing aloud. Finding a way to mix humor and smut so effortlessly in the same paragraph is pure magic to me and something I certainly have never been able to crack.

Scorpius lets out a relieved breath, Al’s carefree tone easing his worries. He carefully pulls his cock out.

“Oh… OH! EW! Ew, quick, wandwandwand!!” Scorpius hands him his wand and he casts a cleaning spell on his arse. “Urgh, that felt bloody disgusting,” he shudders. “Merlin, how do you put up with that so calmly every time?”


Oh my! And this moment, so great! Just so very realistic and also with a touch of humor, it makes the story really come alive!


Okay, so honestly, my brain is still mush but THANK YOU! It was a real struggle to not just highlight the entire thing and run through it piece by piece.

<333


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